the little girl starts walking and each step she takes she conforms more to society, that is eventually finding rent in one of the apartments and getting a car like all the other people. By the time she is at the end of the street her time has come and gone.
color film, is this a first? i'll have to try reala.. nice warm tones.
that leading line draws your eye to the center, not the girl..
the moment is in the bottom third.. that shadow.. well executed. i just think this photo doesnt focus enough on her.
or you should have just taken this from her perspective.. you can tell when a photo is taken while standing up.. gives you the notion of "first person".. getting low would have given you her perspective.. that would have also fixed your leading line problem.
ui die kleine ist ja ur lieb, ich will auch so ne kleine schwester!!!
ich muss zustimmen ihr schatten ist wirklich sehr cool!!
ich hab mich gefragt wo das ist, und eigentlich könnte das überall in wien sein...
wrong. it's a pity when a picture needs a description. at least that's my idea of photography... there is a story for every single shot in my gallery but i just don't feel like sharing them. i prefer the viewer finding their own.
Cut top and buttom as bit. make BW. and the story is - the gap of understanding between parents and children! (see the parents in the end of the way?) as the kid walks - it grows. and the gap becomes smaller and smaller. philosophy in photography. great! (PS Dont forget cutting and BW)
PPS - check my last journal and vote if you got time.